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.Nrq729 { display:none; } Dear Sir:
It is my pleasure to recommend Mr. Fu-ping Wang for his application to graduate studies in your school.
Mr. Wang has been my research assistant of the National Science Council's project "The United States and the United Nations' Financial Crisis: The Role of www.xtzrc.cn Congress" since September 1997. His major responsibilities include information collecting, analyzing and translating. He is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with extremely high potentiality. Mr. Wang is not only quick at learning and good at solving difficult problems, but also with a logical mind that enables him to effectively analyze difficulties. All the work handed to him was completed satisfactorily. Actually, he is so reliable that I assign him with heavy responsibilities. With his help, I have been able to spend more time in writing the research paper. I really consider myself very fortunate to have such a capable assistant.
I am certain his diligence, coupled with a good competence and pleasant personality, will assure him of academic achievements in his future academic pursuits. I strongly recommend his admission without any reservation. www.xtzrc.cn
Sincerely yours,
Chung Wei-kuo
Research Fellow and Professor
The Institute of European and American Studies
Academia Sinica
以上这封推荐信分析:
如果这是封为介绍工作的推荐信,那还不错;但对於对申请研究生来说,不太够说服力.
以下这点是这封推荐信一定需要改正的.这封推荐信不够明确。
不够明确是推荐信不的大忌,就是从信中我们只看到推荐人很努力地用了一大堆形容词,试著告诉对方,申请人很「聪明」、「有激情」、「有潜力」、「有思考能力」等等,可例证没有力.这推荐信又未能指出这个申请者与将要进入的研究领域的关联。

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